Document evidence can contribute two points; each other category contributes one. Pick a category to see what it actually asks a writer to do.
A · Thesis
A historically defensible claim that answers the whole prompt and sets up a line of reasoning. “Industrialization was good and bad” names two sides without saying how much, for whom, or why. The claim usually lives in the introduction or the conclusion.
Near miss: restating the prompt as a question, or listing topics without taking a position.
B · Contextualization
Describe a broader historical development connected to the prompt — and explain the connection. A correct fact sitting in the first paragraph is not context until the writer shows how it created the conditions in the prompt.
Near miss: a period label or a vocabulary dump with no link to the argument.
C1 · Document evidence
The only category here that can contribute two points. The writer first shows accurate understanding of the documents, then uses enough of them to support the argument. Check the current official rubric for the exact thresholds.
Near miss: citation without use. “Document 3 is a political cartoon” identifies a format; it does not do argumentative work.
C2 · Evidence beyond the documents
One specific, relevant historical example that is not taken from the packet and is not simply the contextualization repeated. The point comes from explaining how it supports the argument.
Near miss: dropping a proper noun into a sentence. If the essay reads the same with the fact deleted, it has not been used.
D1 · Sourcing
Explain why a source looks the way it does — situation, audience, purpose, or point of view — and why that matters to the argument. HIPP tells a writer where to look; it does not finish the reasoning.
Near miss: biography. “Carnegie was a wealthy industrialist” is a fact about the author, not an explanation of the source.
D2 · Complexity
Develop a relationship across the evidence — a contradiction, a qualification, a different effect on different groups — and sustain it. Consumers could gain from cheaper goods while the workers producing them lost security; that tension is the argument, not a caveat.
Near miss: the word “however,” or a closing sentence announcing that the issue was complicated.